So, now that some of you have played my map...

... It would be awesome with some feedback!

As you might have noticed, it isnt completely done. There are a few things I still need to add:

-Rooms
-Some invisible walls to prevent glitching
-Reward for secret
-Second secret maybe?
-Music

If you have any requests or ideas for any of the above things (or anything else) please post it here.

Some general opinions - what's good in the map, what's bad, what could be done better, what would you like to see changed etc - would be awesome. I'm going to start working on a new map soon and some feedback would be very helpful so that I can make my next map better.

Thanks!

//Frantic

the map is really good, if you add the last thing it become a fun map

Some of the things I noticed:

In the trap with the platforms that rotate degrees, the 3rd trap to be specific, someone can get stuck into them and it bugs the platform which results into players falling to their death.

In the bounce to the secret sometimes there is an invisible wall that stops me, it kills me when I fall into the water, original entrance to secret though!

The wall blocking you on the bounce is there to make sure no one cheats their way into secret, but i could move it a little and make it less of a problem. Until then, try to bounce further to the left.

And im not quite sure how to fix the platforms, or if its possible. I might have to redo that whole part with something new. 

Thanks for the feedback!

Well, I really like the trap, but maybe this is a solution:

Put 2 bars on the sides of the platform, it should prevent players from getting stuck into the platform itself. Something like 50 cm elevated area. A very little for ants made hallway.

NP

Hm... If I understood you correctly, that would most likely have the opposite effect. Every time someone falls there's now a rather big risk for them to get stuck between the platform and the bar.

make bars in them that make * 4 or even 8 point crossing so | - \ /

Sorry, but im tired right now wich makes me a bit slow... Do you mean bars inside the platforms?

Yep

Frantic ur map is awsome :D but why only 1 can join the room? and only the knife room is working well  also u are very good if this ur first map lol

It is my first map, wich is why there's been some problems with it. The rooms should be working now thanks to dunci, I messed up the scripts a little.